Heart of Kaos
Poems
drive me crazy
drive me crazy isn't close enough to insanity
to define the vicious circle of you and me
I laid my cards on the table & told you how i felt
I just didn't expect the cruel hand you dealt

drowning in self pity, shattered by the rejection
hopelessly waited fro you to share my affection
looking into your eyes i saw the love was definately there
but as the silence lingered, i assumed you didn't care

everytime i see you, i can feel the screws tighten
torturing my spul endlessly until finally beaten
you share my pain as our souls are intertwined
our destinies will cross when the stars are re-aligned
2006-07-28 18:17:47 GMT
Comments (5 total)
Author:Anonymous
Sorry most comments are the same, but they are all so good, and so sad. You are really good at showing your emotion in this way.

x
--Laura
2006-07-28 18:38:17 GMT
Author:Anonymous
Your really good at writing thse poems. The way you show your emotions come out prefectly.
xx
--Jazzie
2006-07-29 18:52:30 GMT
Author:Anonymous
Your really good at writing thse poems. The way you show your emotions come out prefectly.
xx
--Jazzie
2006-07-29 18:52:31 GMT
Author:Anonymous
Beautiful
xx
--> Nina
2006-09-04 10:56:25 GMT
Author:Anonymous
ahhh, gorgeous.....the ending strong....)
--pigenergy
2008-05-21 14:26:05 GMT


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