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RONALD

AGE: 42 COUNTRY: USA STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 1


Original Passage/Word: Professor Ranjith.. students.

Revised Passage/Word: Professor Ranjith gazed through the large window, staring out past the low-lying buildings to the Highway Bridge. The distant, miniature cars moved hypnotically along the road, racing to and fro, to and fro... Yet this painting, true to the basic nature of a picture, was still. Drawn to such an image a thought can effortlessly drift away to a pacific land, gloriously basking in its tranquil abundance. But stirred by the entrance of three students, it snaps back like an outstretched elastic band and jars the sleeper from this pure, entranced state.


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WILLIAM

AGE: 33 COUNTRY: UK STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 15


Original Passage/Word: ..can do for me. We need..

Revised Passage/Word: ..can do for me.' At this Ho Ling and Masilo turned towards the professor awaiting his instructions with interest. 'We need..


About William SW: The internet is now more than a catalogue -ta da!.
The Editor's Comment: Trumpet the way forward, Bill.
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FIONA JONES

AGE: 32 COUNTRY: Canada STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 4


Original Passage/Word: The sunlight.. behind.

Revised Passage/Word: The sunlight streaming in was a striking contrast to the darkness of the evening they had left behind.


About FionaJ: Love the site.
The Editor's Comment: Great.
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JOHAN

AGE: 18 COUNTRY: SA STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 16


Original Passage/Word: ..to stay longer.

Revised Passage/Word: ..to stay longer, realising that they could be more easily swayed than the rigid professor.


About JohanK: I love swimming, sport and plan to study engineering...
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CHRISTINE

AGE: 19 COUNTRY: UK STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 9


Original Passage/Word: The professor.. delighted.

Revised Passage/Word: The professor's delight was lost on the apathetic students.


About ChristineJ: Contrasts his delight against their feelings...
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THREE CHEERS FOR BruceL - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

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BRUCE

AGE: 32 COUNTRY: UK STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 12


Original Passage/Word: Ho Ling was greatly relieved.

Revised Passage/Word: Ho Ling was greatly relieved to discover that the young man was the wrinkly old professor they had traveled with and not another freaky stranger.


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DIANNE

AGE: 26 COUNTRY: SA STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 16


Original Passage/Word: ..their scientific endeavour.

Revised Passage/Word: ..their scientific endeavour. Rosita was curious as to why he considered it a waste of time when they effectively controlled time.


About Dianne S: Visit me on my web page at...
The Editor's Comment: Sure, we'd love to.
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THREE CHEERS FOR GerryK - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

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GERRY

AGE: 27 COUNTRY: RSA STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 7


Original Passage/Word: ..remarked the professor.

Revised Passage/Word: ..remarked the professor, disenchanted.


About Gerry K: Needed more.
The Editor's Comment: Right!?
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MICHAEL

AGE: 21 COUNTRY: USA STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 12


Original Passage/Word: ..direction to follow.' 'And what..

Revised Passage/Word: ..direction to follow.' 'But professor, surely the benefits to mankind lie in the furure! Of what use is it to journey into the past? And what..


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JEFF

AGE: 26 COUNTRY: UK STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 12


Original Passage/Word: ..she continued. 'Are we..

Revised Passage/Word: ..she continued. 'Yet, I thought that you scientist types generally didn't favor creation theories - so.. how is it that you seem to be taking this whole experience at face value? Are we..


About Jeff T: Scientist seems to be out of character?
The Editor's Comment: Good observation.
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