Prisoner 27

<Faria>

Relentlessly, Faria chiseled away at the tightly packed earth, mechanically he wiped the sweat from his brow with the back of his forearm. A unexpected encounter with a rather large boulder pushed back his estimated date for escape by at least eight months. He would have to move around it and hope that he didn’t encounter another. Fourteen years and he’d managed fifty feet – a feat which gave him courage to continue. Any day now, any day and he would break through… and once out he’d have the treasure to console him.

<Dantès>

It had been a day like any other. Dantès had lost all notion of time. What day was it? He couldn't have said what year it was, or even what season! However, before the day was out, it was destined to be one of the most memorable of his entire incarceration. Coming from the other side of the stone wall of his cell, Dantès heard a faint tapping sound. It couldn't be the rats... they scurried around hastily, this was methodical... a sound Dantès had not heard before. It intrigued him. Had they at last put someone in the cell next to his? He hadn't even realised there was a cell next to his. He glanced around his own cell, desperate after all this time not to lose the chance to make contact with another living being. Eventually he seized upon the wooden spoon with which he ate and crossed to the wall. All was quiet. Dantès was almost in tears to think that the other party might have given up... but then the tapping began again. Dantès replied and listened, replied and listened... waiting... hoping for an acknowledgement of some kind.

<Faria>

Faria's chisel hit stone with a spark. Another rock or was it part of the foundation, he rapped slowly along the wall of earth, listening for the softer thud of earth. It must be part of the fortress. Tap. Tap. He felt along the barrier. Stone, too smooth to be natural. He'd dug too high - if he continued thus he would be heard. He felt along the ceiling of the hole. Tap. Tap... and at once he heard an eerie echo from beyond. He raised his hand to test whether his hearing was playing tricks on him and... Tap. Tap. No way could it have been an echo. Some jailor or convict was on the other side, trying to communicate. Neither was a good sign. A jailor meant an investigation... and convicts couldn't be trusted. He crouched there not moving a muscle as he listened for any sign that of who his comrade of the wall could be.

<Dantès>

No response. The sound had gone. Dantès was beside himself, convinced that he had heard someone trying to communicate yet, at the same time, doubting his own sanity. Was his mind playing tricks? Why would it? Why now? Why after all this time would his mind suddenly hear what he had prayed to hear for so long? No, the sound was real. It had to be! How to make the sound start again... that was the problem. He gave a few more taps, trying to make them sound friendly... if tapping can be said to have a tone... and waited again.

<Faria>

Faria looked up and scratched his head, beginning doubt that whoever was communicating with him was a guard. But if the man was a prisoner here, he was likely disreputable. But there was a note of desperation in the man’s efforts which reminded him of his early days when escape seemed far away, Faria repeated back the stranger’s message. “Thank the lord!” Though the response was muffled the voice sounded young, if somewhat unused.

“Who is it that evokes the lord’s name?” Faria demanded. A man who calls upon the lord couldn’t be all bad.

<Dantès>

A voice! The first voice in years that hadn't sworn at him. "A poor wretch," he replied as clearly as he could whilst trying to ensure the gaolers didn't hear, "who thought the Lord had deserted him these many, many moons. Who is it that taps on my cell wall?" He asked in return.

<Faria>

“One who uses the talent the lord has given him to take fate in his own hands,” Faria replied cautiously. The man spoke French without accent, which lead Faria to believe him a native, but it was simple enough to train one’s self to appear other than what one was. “What’s is your name and country and what crime had you done to be placed here?”

<Dantès>

"Dantès." he said, "Edmond Dantès of Marseilles and I am innocent. I have committed no crime... I haven't even been tried... they just brought me here and locked me away. I would to God I knew why!”

<Faria>

“Most curious…” Faria mused. Imprisoned without a trial. One would think they had returned to the days of the lettre de cache. It was unconscionable! “How long have you been here?”

"Since the 28th of February, 1815."

“And you say you know not why you were arrested? Tell me the circumstances of your arrest and imprisonment.”

<Dantès>

There was a time when holding a conversation with a faceless voice through a solid stone wall would have struck Dantès as odd, even slightly creepy; but now he was glad of any excuse to talk. Perhaps, he thought, this voice is nothing more than a figment of my imagination. Perhaps there is no one there. Perhaps I am truly mad! But he dismissed the idea. Even if he were mad, he was happier than he had been for a long, long time... so let madness take him, for sanity without that voice would be unbearable. Slowly, to ensure he missed nothing out, Dantès told how he had carried out the last request of his captain; gone to Elba; received a letter, the contents of which he did not know; been denounced by someone, he knew not who0; been interrogated by M de Villefort and, just as he expected to be released, had been suddenly and violently thrown into the Chateau d'If, without trial or chance to appeal. "So you see, I believe I am truly innocent, for I have never been tried. I wish they would try me and, if guilty, execute me. It is the uncertainty of not knowing my crime that is such torture." He paused, before adding softly, "I would never wish you away my friend, but I do wish I could see your face, to prove to myself that I am not a madman talking to phantoms."

<Faria>

Faria listened carefully to every word, considering every angle – seeing possibilities. The story was too fantastic to be a ruse. If anything it sounded like the boy was the victim of the ambitions of others. “It is a strange tale you’ve told me,” he said finally.

“It is the uncertainty of not knowing my crime that is such torture."

“I can imagine.” He scratched his heavily furred chin thoughtfully.

"I would never wish you away my friend, but I do wish I could see your face, to prove to myself that I am not a madman talking to phantoms." The voice was almost pleading. It was a considerable request, but natural for anyone who had been deprived so long of human contact. Faria thoughts battled against each other…

“Have you any tools with which to dig?”

<Dantès>

Tools? Where did the man think he was? There was nothing in Dantès' cell save his bed, bowl and pitcher... the pitcher! He dashed it against the stone flags and it shattered into sharp fragments. When his gaoler arrived, he would say he tripped over it accidentally... it wouldn't be the first time. Dantès hoarded a few of the larger fragments to use to scrape at the mortar. "Yes," he called back, "I have something with which to dig."

<Faria>

Faria jumped as he heard something smash against the floor above him. While the noise was unexpected, he could easily guess what had happened: lacking the necessary equipment the young man had found a way to remedy that. "Yes, I have something with which to dig," the young man called back, confirming Faria's impression.

"Excellent," then reached up and tapped on the ceiling of his tunnel. "Can you hear where this is coming from? Tell me what is above it."

<Dantès>

"It is a large block at the base of the wall in my cell." The mortar was rotten with damp and Dantès found he could scrape it away quite quickly, but it would still take hours to extract the stone.

<Faria>

“Excellent, excellent,” Faria repled, considering. “Is it visible from your doorway? Could the jailor easily see the spot? What we need is a spot not so readily noticeable where the loose stone would not draw attention.”

<Dantès>

"I can hide it with the end of my bed." he replied. "I need only drag it a few inches and no one will know." He was now digging frantically at the mortar and the sudden use of his arms in that way was making them ache, but Dantès would not give up now.

<Faria>

Listening to the furious pounding above, Faria took a step back. At that rate, he was likely to kill himself. "Listen, you must not kill yourself. Time is something we have in abundance here. And you must be careful that you are not heard."

<Dantès>

To be told to wait, told to be patient, when they were so close... it was not what Dantès wanted to hear, but the man was right, they must not be heard. He paused and listened, but the gaoler was not around... no one in his right mind would spend longer than necessary in that foul, stinking dungeon. Slowly and with more care, Dantès began to dig again. How long would it take to reach the voice behind the wall? An hour, a day, a week? "I don't even know how far I have to dig." he said, hoping for an answer, when in all probability the other prisoner knew no more than he.

<Faria>

Faria felt a fair amount of dirt fall on his face as Edmond progressed and Faria helped him from the underside. A man of such spirit would be valuable, if he was trustworthy. “You are close,” he called, then added, but the jailor will be coming soon with supper, so you must hide your work. Take the dirt you have loosen and disperse it across the room. He must suspect nothing.”

<Dantès>

Oh the agony of having to suspend his work! But Dantès had recognized in the voice a superiority of mind, and instinctively obeyed the command. He collected the mortar into his food bowl... it seemed such a little amount for so much effort... and then he climbed up to the small opening that passed for a window and, handful by handful, scattered it to the winds. Wiping his bowl on one of the rags covering his cot, Dantès pulled the bed forward slightly to disguise the digging and waited. It seemed to take the gaoler forever to complete his rounds, but at last Dantès heard footsteps outside his cell. He was chided for the breakage of his jug, but the occurrence was too common to cause concern. His evening meal was dished out and, whilst the gaoler wandered off to get a new jug, Dantès ate as quickly as he could. "My, you were hungry tonight 34!" Commented the gaoler, "I'm glad to see you eating again, I feared you might be trying to starve yourself... and I wouldn't want that."

"Of course not, I'm only worth money to you as long as I live." replied Edmond bitterly.

"Come now 34, don't be like that." But Dantès turned away, so the gaoler shrugged and gave up on the conversation. Half and hour later, when Dantès was sure that the gaoler would not be returning, he pushed back his cot and knocked cautiously on the stone to see if his new friend had returned.

<Faria>

Faria returned quickly to his cell, hid the evidence of his work and just barely threw himself onto his cot when the gaoler arrived. The man said nothing, having long ago grown to dislike the old Abbé and his curious habits, merely staying long enough to feed the prisoner and satisfy himself that the man was still breathing. Faria waited but a fraction of a minute after the gaoler left to return to his tunnel and listen as the jailor questioned his neighbor. Perhaps half a minute passed, then Faria heard the scraping of the cot being shoved aside, then a hesitant tap. “Don’t worry, I have not abandoned you,” Faria called back.

<Dantès>

"Thank heaven!" he whispered in relief and began once more to dig. The sun had long since set, but years of captivity in the perpetual gloom had taught Dantès to see in the dark. He continued to scrape away for another three hours until at last he felt the stone move slightly.

<Faria>

From underneath, Faria scraped away at the earth just below where his neighbour worked, widening the hole so that a man might pass through. After hours he felt a brick give way and a sound of excitement from the other side. “The work will be easier now, but do not damage the bricks. You will need to fix them back in place afterward.”

As Faria promised, the work went faster. Five, six hours after the initial block gave way, they had created a hole wide enough for Faria to pass through. Carefully, cautiously Faria popped his head and shoulder out of the hole. “Impressive work for but a single day,” he told the young man who looked at him with relief and incredulity.

<Dantès>

At first he took a step back, as though wondering what to expect... so long had Dantes been in solitary confinement that perhaps he imagined only a demon or genie could enter his cell undetected. However, this instinctive recoil lasted but a few seconds before he ran to the opening to help the man pull himself through. Dantes looked his new companion up and down... assessing him, as no doubt he was being assessed in his turn. The prisoner was nearly naked and looked a thin, old man; but behind such a dusty, straggling beard and hair, it was hard to tell who lurked beneath. Dantès stared for a moment... speechless... then he embraced the stranger before him. "You're real! You are real!" he exclaimed in great sobs turning his eyes heaven-wards, "Oh Lord, how could I ever have doubted you? To send me a sign when I was most in need." Then he looked once more at the man and found he could do nothing but repeat his thankful mantra... "you are real!"

<Faria>

Faria smiled in amusement, "As real as anything in this place. The key to fending off the madness is to remember who you are and what you are, young man." The fact was that he was still very young, and in the time Faria had to think it through there seemed no good reason for the young man to be here save that Providence delivered him to Faria to help in his work. Faria looked over the cell and frowned, finally embracing the truth he had avoided: he had been burrowing in the wrong direction. "This is all wrong, the tunnel should have been working towards the outer wall," he finally said.

<Dantès>

"The outer wall?" asked Dantès, not understanding.

<Faria>

"D'If is built on an island," Faria explained. "If a man burrows in on direction long enough, far enough he will come out on the side of this rock."

<Dantès>

"Then you were trying to escape!" said Dantès, the light dawning. "But what went wrong? How come you tunneled to my cell instead?"

<Faria>

Faria scratched his chin through his beard, he had been considering that since Dantès made contact. "A schematic miscalculation compounded by a rather large boulder," he finally said. "This a frustrating turn of events... I'll have to recalculate the direction of the tunnel..."

<Dantès>

"Can I help?" asked Dantès. Just a few hours ago he had wanted nothing more than to die, now he could catch the faintest scent of freedom... of a world he thought himself destined never to see again. It made him want to live. It made him want to sing and dance and cry. Most of all, it made him want to work. "How long would it take us to redirect the tunnel?"

<Faria>

Faria scratched his chin through his beard, he had been considering that since Dantès made contact. "A schematic miscalculation compounded by a rather large boulder," he finally said. "This a frustrating turn of events... I'll have to recalculate the direction of the tunnel..."

<Dantès>

"Can I help?" asked Dantès. Just a few hours ago he had wanted nothing more than to die, now he could catch the faintest scent of freedom... of a world he thought himself destined never to see again. It made him want to live. It made him want to sing and dance and cry. Most of all, it made him want to work. "How long would it take us to redirect the tunnel?"

<Faria>

“Perhaps,” Faria murmured. The young man had shown himself to be industrious and determined, but was he trust worthy? Would he betray a fellow when the going got tough? “It is difficult to say. I began about a year after I arrived and I’ve gotten as far as this. Your help would speed the process, but your tools…” he pointed to the now practically useless piece of pitcher than Dantès still gripped in his hand, “won’t last long. We would have to fashion more lasting tools. If you expect escape tonight or this or month or year you will be greatly disappointed.” But something shifted in Faria at Dantès’s crestfallen look. “I can show you how to fashion tools, I’ve diagramed the process.”

<Dantès>

"You've made tools?" Dantès asked incredulously, yet with an excited optimism that showed he was a man who wanted to believe the impossible with all his heart. "Out of what? Show me!"

<Faria>

"Quietly, young man, quietly," the Abbé admonished. "You may be heard. But here, here is my chisel, made out of one of the clamps of my bedstead." He handed Dantès a sharp strong blade, with a handle made of beech wood. "It is responsible for the majority of the fifty feet I've tunneled. I've also pincers and a lever... but I lack a good file." His voice full of humility.

<Dantès>

Dantes handled the chisel like a sacred relic, marvelling at the simplicity and practicality of its construction and, more than that, at the genius of the man who made it from virtually nothing. When Faria told him there were more, Dantes could scarcely believe it. "Show me!" he begged, like and excited child.

<Faria>

Fuelled by Dantes's enthusiasm and a since of comraderie he hadn't felt in years, Faria was compelled to share his inventions with the young man. "We will have to go to my cell," he explained even as he lowered himself into the hole through which he came. "You'll have to stoop as you walk, but it is quite sound."

Faria followed the familiar path to the faint light at the other end which marked his cell. "You see the tunnel goes in the opposite direction for a ways before it ends at a large mass of granite. It would take ten miners as many years to break though it."

<Dantès>

Dantes was astounded by the scale of the tunnel and the length. "You dug all this yourself?" he asked in astonishment, comprehending for the first time the full weight of the man's achievement.

<Faria>

"I've had plenty of time to do it in," Faria replied, then added with a sweeping gesture, "Years. " He scrambled up through the hole and into his own cell and lent Dantes his hand so that he might follow. "I wish I might offer a different view, but my cell is very much like your own, except...." here he knelt down beside his bed and felt around for his hidey hole, in a moment he was back on his feet with the tools he'd took such great pains to craft. "... a few additions I've made."

<Dantès>

Dantes had not felt it possible to be any more astounded than he had been by the chisel and the tunnel, but he beheld the array of implements agog. A knife, a fork, a spoon all meticulously crafted... and there amongst them all, a pen. Dantes singled it out for closer attention. It was so long since he had held anything so delicate, that his fingers felt clumsy in a movement that had once been quite natural. "You made a pen." he said staring at it, a large tear of wonderment on his cheek. "You write things?"

<Faria>

"Of course," Faria replied. "I have sketched out my inventions and what I know of this prison, I make details my progress so that I may refer back to them when I have run into a set-back. I have treated two of my shirts so that they are as smooth and easy to write on as paper and I make my ink from the soot in that old fireplace and the wine they give me every Sunday." He pointed to the long unused fireplace position on the walk opposite his bed. "But tell me what you know of the world before you were imprisoned here, for it was some years after I was."

<Dantès>

"I..." began Dantes and then stopped abruptly. What did he know of the world? He had been a sailor not a politician and he didn't want to appear foolish in front of his intelligent, new friend. "There is much trouble in France." he started slowly, wracking his brains for all he had heard from his father, from Morrel, from Villefort even. "The Emperor was driven out of France and exiled to Elba. The King was reinstated, but I understand that many were not happy about it. They remained loyal to Bonaparte and wanted him back. I know there were plots and conspiracies galore... and they were taken very seriously" Because I am here, he thought bitterly, visualising the cursed letter burning in Villefort's grate, "I don't know anymore. I don't even know if the Bonapartists succeeded or not."

<Faria>

Faria proceeded the new details, "Fascinating, very fascinating. So much change in so little time, and yet some much stays the same... but now your case greatly interests me, my friend. I occurs to me that you have been undone by your colleagues and men who had much to gain by your removal from society."

<Dantès>

"How is it you see the matter so clearly in minutes, when I have spent years with a fogged mind?" Dantes was beginning to think that this man was either a genius, or the madman he'd heard the gaolers speak of at times. "Tell me," he pleaded with feverish eyes, "help me! I have to know the truth... help me to know the truth... please."

<Faria>

"It is a simple matter that you may come to learn, my friend," Faria replied, ceasing his pacing and propping himself up against the wall. "Your thoughts are clouded because your emotions are too strong, because you look at your world and the people in it and associate emotions to them, so you don't see how any one of those supposed friends might do you a turn." Dantes blinked in confusion.

"Look here, aren't the events of that day most peculiar? You said the only people who knew of that letter were your shipmate and your employer, and the latter because of the former, right?" Dantes nodded. "Did you show it or talk of it to anyone else?"

"No," the young man replied.

"So at least one of the fiends is your employer or your shipmate, I think you will agree your shipmate is the more likely suspect. What would each have to gain from your imprisonment?"

<Dantès>

"Nothing!" replied Dantes instinctively, "I mean, I didn't much like the fellow. We quarrelled once and had a fight, which I won; but I wouldn't hold such a trivial matter against him. When I became captain of the Pharoan, he would still have had employment. He's a fair worker, very good with numbers. We needed a man with a financial head, so I would have been foolish to let a petty squabble cloud my judgement." Of course, he'd never told Danglars that, because he hadn't remained captain for more than a few hours... not time enough to select any of his crew.

<Faria>

“See. You are clouding the matter with emotion again,” Faria interjected. “Perhaps it is difficult for you to see because you do not think in those terms, but look beyond how you would behave to how another might. Where is the benefit? I do not give up entirely on your employer, but let’s look at the shipmate more carefully. You stated that told your employer about the letter, which makes me wondered why... Tell me, who was next likely to make captain had not you been chosen?

<Dantès>

"It's possible," replied Dantes slowly, "He was the only other senior officer on board, so naturally if anything had happened to the captain and myself he would have had to take charge, but..." he paused and frowned. Dantes wasn't used to thinking ill of people he'd once regarded as almost friends. "I don't think he would have made a good captain. He was too sullen and tactless with the men. They didn't like him."

<Faria>

“Their opinion of him matters little, dear boy,” Faria explained. “Such a position comes with power which demands respect and there is too the increase in monetary gain. Men have killed and been killed for as much. Now, who else might profit? Who else might conspire with such a man again you? Have you nothing else that men might covet?”

<Dantès>

"Nothing!" He exclaimed, thinking that the Abbe still spoke of wealth. "My father depended entirely on me and I had barely enough left for myself. The little I had managed to save was for my fiancée, Mercedes... oh, Mercedes, where are you now?" Dantes gave a small sob as that particular mental wound re-opened.

<Faria>

“Ah, yes! The wedding,” Faria exclaimed, recalling Edmond’s tale. “Tell me, were there others who vie for the attentions of said mademoiselle?”

<Dantès>

"What are you implying?" he asked quite angrily. How dare the man suggest that Mercedes was anything other than a faithful fiancée. "Mercédès would never...!"

<Faria>

“No, no, no, my boy! You misunderstand me,” Faria replied. “I am not questioning your lady’s honour, but that of others who might envy the attentions that she has bestowed upon you. Is there no other who look after your lady with the light of love in his eyes? No man who burns holes into the back of your skull for every moment that you spend with the young mademoiselle?”

<Dantès>

"I don't..." he began, his anger subsiding as quickly as it had come, replaced by shame. His first contact with another human other than his gaoler for 7 years and he argues with the man. Damn you, Edmond, you've been alone too long! He was about to say he knew of no one when the sentence froze on his lips. "Fernand!"

<Faria>

"Ah, there is your second suspect, my boy," Faria grinned. "Men would do anything for the favours of a beautiful woman. You say your woman is true to you, which gives more weight to the idea that this Fernand may have been involved. How else was he to sever your bond without alienation the girl, other than to conspire to make you disappear?"

<Dantès>

"Wait a minute... I saw them together, Fernand and Danglars, the day before I was arrested! I didn't even know they were acquainted, so it struck me as odd at the time, but then I put it out of my mind. How could it not have registered all these years? My dear friend, you are showing me the truths I have been to blind or stupid to see on my own and I am most grateful."

<Faria>

"Perhaps their were others, perhaps not," Faria replied. "As you think on it now the answer may become clearer, but there is whom we have not discussed. The man who arrested you... you say he believed your innocence?"

<Dantès>

"Caderousse... Caderousse was with them... drunk as a Lord!" It was all becoming horribly clear to Dantès now. They had framed him, all three. But the Abbé was right, what about Villefort? He had believe Edmond a naive fool, but not a traitor, so why was Edmond Dantès not free? "Villefort told me I was innocent, yes."

<Faria>

Seeing Dante’s eyes sharpen to the truth, Faria nodded solemnly. After this day, the boy would never look at the world the same way again. “A man would not sentence an innocent as you have been without cause. Either for gain or to protect himself. With your new perception, tell me, when did Villefort change? Was it before or after he read the letter entrusted to you?”

<Dantès>

"After he had read it... no, wait, the letter wasn't addressed. His attitude only changed after I told him who I'd been asked to deliver it to." Dantes was confused again and looked imploringly at Faria, "But what difference could that possibly make? I was doing my duty by giving up a man I then knew to be a traitor... surely that act should have secured my freedom."

<Faria>

“One might think that... and be proven wrong,” Faria replied solemnly, peeling himself away from the wall and sitting on the edge of his bed. All the time his eyes never left Dantes’. “That you are here and not enjoying the company of your woman or guiding your ship proves there is more to this than simply denouncing a traitor. The method of your imprisonment suggests to me that there was something in the name you gave that struck close to this Villefort. Can you still recall the name?”

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