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The
Kid (Revised First Draft of the Young Riders' Pilot)
By Ed Spielman (creator)
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Here's a copy
of a draft of the pilot episode of The Young Riders. There are lines and,
sometimes, entire scenes cut from the final episode we saw. I thought the
deleted stuff was as interesting as the stuff that was shown, because it
gave us an idea of what the creator's mindset was. Alas, there is no mention
of the Kid's real name. I put the missing text in color for your convenience.
'Hope you enjoy this special treat! |
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STATIONMISTRESS:
True enough this is the first image we
see of the Kid. But what's different is the Kid is not wearing knickers
and suspenders. He has on scruffy but neat pants, white shirt and a vest.
Also there is no voice over from an old
man. All we get is a variation of the series' score.
There is no shopkeeper either. Kid does
pass by a man selling apples. We see Kid looking at the apples hungrily,
but, of course, he can't afford to buy food.
Also, the Kid sees the boxing ring, as
well as Paddy McGirk and the Irish pugilist before he even finds Katy.
I'll explain later why this is important.
CREDITS: Pictures on this page where generously
lent by Beth from Saddles
n' Spurs. |
The Young Riders
Pilot
The Kid
By Ed Spielman
Rev. First Draft, December
7, 1988
Prologue
FADE IN:
EXT: THE DAKOTAS -- DAY
(APRIL 1860)
A small town on the endless
prairie. A boy walks into view. He comes out of the red dust into town;
he wears knickers and suspenders, scuffed high shoes and a shirt patched
in three places. His wide-brimmed hand-me-down hat flops to one side; a
shock of sandy-colored hair protrudes from beneath the brim. The boy's
face is young, strong, fair and freckled, with blue eyes, a small and plain
nose. The expression is kindly-natured, a curious combination of naiveté
and hard experience. He is broke and hungry. He is 16 years old.
We
hear the voice of an OLD MAN (voice over), an interesting and eccentric
resonance with a Western twang.
OLD
MAN (V.O.)
I
remember it clear .. clear as that blue sky day in April 1860. He come
in out of the red dust, from nowhere in particular. Nobody knew his real
name. And I never heard him called anything 'cept ... THE KID.
The
boy walks down the crude board sidewalk and stops at the window of a store
marked provisions.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
Inside,
the shopkeeper is busy with his wares. The Kid hesitantly speaks to him
from the doorway.
THE
KID
Need
any work done?
SHOPKEEPER
Nope.
Five young 'uns of my own to do that.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
The
shopkeeper takes notice of the boy's resigned expression, picks up a small,
freshly-baked bread.
SHOPKEEPER
But,
if you're hungry, you can have this.
THE
KID
No,
thanks ...
His
hunger and pride intact, the Kid continues through town. |
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This scene was pretty much
shot the way it was written. |
EXT. TOWN --
A STABLE -- DAY
The Kid walks past a barn,
fenced pens of livestock and a sign: Johnson's Livery -- Horses -- Bought/Sold/Traded
ANOTHER ANGLE
There, inside a wood post
corral, is an animal of rare beauty. It is a paint horse, a brown and white
Indian pony with a speckled mane. She is sleek, lean and wiry, much like
the Kid. She stands easily alone in the corral.
The Kid stops and stares,
forgetting his hunger. The horse turns and looks at him. It is a simple,
touching contact.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Johnson, the stable owner,
is a mercenary sort with a mustache.
JOHNSON
Get away from there, sonny.
THE KID
Just lookin'.
JOHNSON
Look someplace else.
The Kid cannot take his eyes
from the Indian pony.
THE KID
How much?
JOHNSON
That's not just any horse.
I never had a better one, and don't 'spect to. (A beat) She's twenty five
dollars ... and cheap at that.
The boy stands silently,
just looking at the wonderful animal.
JOHNSON
Don't set your heart on
'er, sonny. You prob'ly won't never see twenty five dollars.
The Kid takes a last look,
fixing her in his mind, and moves on. |
Now, here's why the fact that
Kid saw the boxing ring before he saw Katy is important.
If Kid saw the boxing ring earlier, then
he already had an idea how to get $25 needed to buy Katy. That's why in
the episode, we saw the Kid pushing through the crowd of boxing spectators,
with seeming purpose. He may not have been familiar with the rules of the
game (that he didn't have to beat the Irish boxer), but he knew he'd get
$30 if he won.
Again, this scene is pretty much shot the
way it was written. The spectators may have ad libbed a bit, but it was
mostly the 'Get up, sonny' type of thing.
Any difference would probably lie in the
look of the scene, rather than the feel. For one, I didn't see 'cauiliflowered'
ears on the Irish pugilist. And second, the scene didn't feature a prized
ring of roped canvas, as described in the script. The enclosure looked
more like a corral to me. |
EXT. THE TOWN
-- DAY
The Kid proceeds down the
street and hears a COMMOTION, the sounds of a SPORTING EVENT. In a clearing
is a prize ring of roped canvas and a small crowd of townspeople. Near
the ring is a small enclosed wagon the side of which is an artfully lettered
sign:
IRISH JOHNNY McCLARNEN
THE SHAMROCK ASSASSIN
PRIZE RING CHAMPION -- PUGILISTIC
EXHIBITIONS
Paddy O. McGirk, Mgr.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid moves closer and
observes two men contesting with bare knuckles. The larger of them is an
unshaven bear of a man.
The Kid studies the smaller
combatant with interest. He has reddish, curly hair, is bare-chested and
wears a pugilist's waist to ankles leotard and ring shoes. His 21, of average
height and weight. His young face reveals his craft, a slightly flattened
nose, ears a bit cauliflowered. IRISH JOHNNY McCLARNEN'S eyes observe,
seem to anticipate the other man's every move.
The big man swings again,
again. The pugilist 'slips' the punches, then WHAP! WHAP! He counters.
The big man staggers and falls.
ANOTHER ANGLE
the boxer's manager, PADDY
O. McGIRK, is a wiry man n his 50s. He wears a tweed cap and a ring-scarred
face. He hits the RINGSIDE BELL with a hammer, puts the bills of wagered
money into his pocket and enters the ring. Paddy speaks with an Irish brogue.
PADDY
Two minutes and twelve seconds.
A bucket of water is tossed
onto the seemingly dead challenger. He raises his head and is dragged out.
Paddy surveys the crowd.
PADDY
Thirty dollars to any man
that can stand three minutes to the finish with Irish Johnny McClarnen.
Next!
There are no more takers,
except for ...
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid, He climbs into
the ring.
PADDY
Hey, get out of there, boy!
THE KID
You said 'anybody'.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Paddy walks quickly over
to speak to the youth, quietly, with almost paternal concern.
PADDY
You ever fight, bucko?
THE KID
Not in a ring.
He surveys Irish Johnny.
THE KID
Do I have to beat him?
PADDY
(amazed at his guts) No,
you don't have to beat him ... thirty dollars if you're still standing
after three minutes.
The Kid nods his understanding.
Paddy speaks more privately.
PADDY
(alarm)
There's nothing here for you, sonny. Don't you understand? He's a professional.
Nobody needs money that bad. He'll kill you.
The Kid holds McGirk's gaze
... and waits in his corner. A VOICE calls from the crowd:
BYSTANDER (O.S.)
Give the lad a chance!
Several others echo his sentiments.
ANOTHER ANGLE
There is a moment of eye
contact between Paddy and the Kid. Paddy knows what is about to happen.
THE BELL RINGS. The Kid comes
out of his corner ...
EXT. THE RING -- DAY
The fight is in progress.
There is an audible reaction from the crowd. The Kid is down on one knee,
his face turned away from view.
PADDY
Stay
down, boy! Are you crazy?
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid gets to his feet
and turns TOWARD THE CAMERA. His face is pocked with bloody welts, one
eye swollen shut. He is taking a terrible beating. McClarnen slams a right
into his ribs. The Kid's knees buckle, but he refuses to go down. He clinches.
PADDY
Get
out, damnit, get out before he kills you.
McClarnen pushes him away.
The Kid comes back swinging. McClarnen bats his punches away, and hits
him at will. With the crowd cheering and Paddy exhorting him to stay down,
the Kid refuses to give up though he is beaten, refuses to be knocked out
though he is half senseless. Second by second, he stands his ground and
takes what is meted out to him.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid swings a clumsy
left and a right. Johnny looks sidelong to a hapless Paddy, as if to signal
what he is bound to do. Then he does it. He slams a hook into the Kid's
ribs and then a staggering right. The Kid stiffens with a jerk, his eyes
roll back and he falls heavily on his face. The pugilist walks away from
him.
ANOTHER ANGLE
From somewhere beyond courage
or consciousness, the Kid's eyes open, though hardly focusing. His last
measure of endurance long gone, he slowly, agonizingly drags himself to
one knee.
Then, he stands up.
The crowd falls to a hush.
The bell sounds. The Kid is still standing after three minutes. The crowd
begins to cheer.
EXT. JOHNSON'S LIVERY --
LATER -- DAY
Johnson, sweeping out a
stall, senses another presence, and turns.
ANOTHER ANGLE
There is the Kid. He stands
painfully erect, but can hardly talk. He looks more than half dead. He
holds a fistful of bills.
THE KID
Twenty-five ... dollars.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Johnson stares at him for
a moment, dumbfounded, then slips a bridle on the paint horse and leads
her out of the stall. He hands the reins to the Kid and takes his money
without counting it. Johnson is a hard man, but even he is touched by the
price that the boy has paid.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid takes the pony's
lead. He strokes the animal's velvet nose, she whinnies softly. He smiles
at her and leads his horse away.
FADE OUT
END OF PROLOGUE |
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A whole chunk from the prologue
was taken out, I'm thinking during the editing. The episode must have come
in way beyond the required one hour and the producers had to trim it.
This scene is interesting, especially to
Kidettes, because we see right away how skilled Kid is in horsebackriding
and shooting. We never actually see that until later in the episode when
Jimmy "challenges" Kid with the cans. Even in the training sequences later,
Kid didn't have a montage of his own.
The scene also established solidly Kid's
unusual bond with Katy. As it is, we see a mere hint of it. There's a line
on the right that says Kid doesn't tie Katy to the hitching post. And if
you look closely at that scene, he really doesn't. He just kinda drapes
them over. I think that said a lot about the relationship. Katy was pretty
much a "new" horse, but Kid knew she wouldn't leave. Getting stolen is
another matter ;-) |
ACT I
FADE IN:
EXT: SWEETWATER -- DAY
Sweetwater is another town
on the endless prairie. It is a bright day of vast blue skies. From the
far background, MOVING SLOWLY TOWARD THE CAMERA, a boy and his horse RIDE
INTO VIEW.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid's face has completely
healed. He still wears knickers and suspenders, patched shirt and wide
hand-me-down hat. He and "Katy" ride easily. The Kid has acquired a saddle
and an old, blued Remington "horse pistol" which he now wears on his hip.
ANOTHER ANGLE
He rides slowly down the
main street and reins the mare in by an office near a salon. The office
window is etched: CENTRAL OVERLAND EXPRESS." Tacked on the wall by the
window is a poster. The Kid keeps his mount and silently reads.
CLOSE-UP -- THE POSTER
WANTED
Young, skinny, wiry fellows,
not over 18.
Must be expert riders, willing
to face death daily.
Orphans preferred, Wages
$5 a week.
Apply Central Overland Express.
Russell, Majors and Waddell
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid dismounts. He does
not tie Katy's reins to the hitching post, but simply drapes them over.
She stands easily as he enters the office.
INT. THE OFFICE -- CENTRAL
OVERLAND EXPRESS -- DAY
The Kid enters quietly.
A gray-haired man in gartered shirtsleeves, vest and green eye shade sits
behind a darkly polished wooden desk, busying himself with paperwork, He
is the Overland Express Agent, HENRY LOVELL. He Looks up.
LOVELL
Help you, sonny?
(a pause)
THE KID
It's me on the sign outside
He looks the Kid up and down,
taking his measure.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
Lovell
wordlessly opens a drawer and takes a green apple out of it. Carrying the
apple, he comes from behind his desk and the Kid follows him out of the
office through the back door.
EXT.
BEHIND THE OFFICE -- SAME SCENE -- DAY
The
whole of the endless prairie is behind them
LOVELL
get
your mount.
The
Kid whistles, a sound like a cardinal's call
ANOTHER
ANGLE
Katy
suddenly appears, trotting around to the back of the office where she stops
beside the kid. This unusual affinity registers with Lovell.
LOVELL
I
need to see you shoot on horseback
The
Kid swings up onto Katy's back. He pats her neck.
LOVELL
Hands
in the air. At full gallop, then fire.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
The
Kid rides Katy to a distance of forty yards, the turns. He holds the reins
in his teeth and his hands in the air.
LOVELL
Come
ahead.
The
Kid spurs Katy on. Abruptly, Lovell tosses the apple high to his opposite
side. In one motion, the kid draws his old Remington and FIRES, the apple
exploding into fragments as he charges past.
Lovell
eyes the Kid without emotion or approval.
INT. CENTRAL OVERLAND EXPRESS
OFFICE -- SAME SCENE -- LATER -- DAY
Lovell looks at the Kid
for a long moment to discern his character.
LOVELL
No parents?
THE KID
(quietly) No.
LOVELL
Relatives? Friends? Anyone
to speak for you?
THE KID
(a beat) No.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Lovell studies the Kid and
makes his decision. He opens his desk drawer and produces an printed sheet
of paper. He gives it to the Kid.
LOVELL
You can read, can't you,
sonny?
THE KID
Yes sir. (reading)
I ... Pony Express .. Rider ...
He does so with difficulty.
Lovell takes it from him and reads it aloud.
LOVELL
"I, Pony Express Rider,
do hereby swear before the great and Living God that during my engagement
and while I am an employee of Russell, Majors and Waddell, I will under
no circumstances use profane language, that I will not quarrel or fight
with an other employee of the firm, and that in every respect I will conduct
myself honestly, be faithful to my duties, and so direct all my acts as
to win the confidence of my employers. So help me God."
Lovell dips a quill pen in
ink and hands it to him.
LOVELL
Make your mark. Right under
"So help me God."
There is a moment of eye
contact between them. The Kid signs.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Lovell produces a cloth-bound
Bible, then places a five-dollar bill on top of it. He presents both to
The Kid.
LOVELL
One for your soul and one
for your pocket. (a beat) An advance in pay. Dangerous work shouldn't be
done for nothing'.
Henry Lovell and the Kid
shake hands. The agreement is sealed.
LOVELL
My boy, you are now a Pony
Express rider.
The Kid shyly nods his thanks.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
The
agent regards the contract which the Kid has signed. He opens a desk top
drawer and places it atop half a dozen others. He looks after the Kid has
already gone. |
Again, the focus of this scene
is the Kid's character. We see that though he is young, he is not naive.
We also see where those firecrackers came
from. There is actually a line from the filmed scene where Teaspoon helps
Kid prepare for his first ride.
Teaspoon says, "Don't forget my bag of
tricks, Kid."
And Kid responds, "Got a few of my own."
Now we know what's inside of those bag
of tricks. |
INT.
A GENERAL STORE -- DAY
The
Kid enters and begins to browse carefully, examining the goods. The STOREKEEPER
takes notice of him while waiting on a customer.
STOREKEEPER
Something
you want?
THE
KID
Maybe.
INT.
SAME SCENE -- LATER -- DAY
The
Kid stands at the counter, the storekeeper about to figure his purchases.
The Kid puts down a set of handmade, bead-worked buckskins and moccasins.
STOREKEEPER
Those
are good buckskins. Made by a squaw outside of town.
THE
KID
How
much?
STOREKEEPER
Three
dollars.
Without
comment the Kid pushes them aside.
STOREKEEPER
Two
fifty.
The
Kid wordlessly puts them back in the center of the counter. He will take
them. The storekeeper, now wise that the boy will not be trifled with,
begins to total his other purchases.
STOREKEEPER
One
deluxe blanket, beef jerky, three boxes of .44 caliber, half box of cigars,
one leather saddlebag and seven mats of Chinese firecrackers. Anything
else?
THE
KID
Chewin'
tobacco.
STOREKEEPER
(setting
a couple of plugs down) a mite young to chew, ain't ya, son?
THE
KID
Don't
chew. Horse do.
STOREKEEPER
Four
dollars ninety.
The
Kid give shim his five dollar bill and accepts the dime change. Transaction
completed, the storekeeper becomes less businesslike.
STOREKEEPER
You
just hire on down the street?
The
Kid nods. Carrying his purchases, he begins to exit.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
The
storekeeper calls after him.
STOREKEEPER
Good
luck.
THE
KID
Thank
you.
The
Kid exits.
STOREKEEPER
(to
himself) You're sure goin' to need it.
EXT.
OUTSIDE THE GENERAL STORE -- DAY
the
Kid comes out to the sidewalk and walks over to Katy. He rubs her nose,
she nuzzles his hand.
The
Kid and Katy ride off. |
Emma is introduced in this
scene, although in the finished product we see her for the first time when
the plainsman comes with the supplies and she takes an instant aversion
to the Beckwith volley guns.
This scene also showed that there are other
riders aside from our boys, well, at least one other rider, and that Emma
feels maternal toward all of them.
I agree with the editors' decision to cut
this scene. Emma made so much more impact in that scene where she tells
Teaspoon "They're not orphans while I'm around." I thought that line said
a lot about how she viewed herself and the boys in her care. |
EXT.
EMMA SHANNON'S WAY STATION -- DAY
Emma's
Way Station along the Platte River is a modest homestead that has been
converted into a Pony Express depot. The small main house needs fixing
, but there are feminine touches, curtains. There is a corral with a dozen
horses in it.
The
door to the cabin flies open and a young woman storms out. EMMA SHANNON
is no more than twenty give, though a live of overwork has made her appear
older. Her face is plain but attractive, with Scottish/Irish features.
She wears a proper dress and buttoned shoes. Emma has dragged a protesting
sixteen-year-old boy abruptly of out of the cabin by his ear.
EMMA
Don't
you ever use language like that in my station again. I'll take a switch
to you like your folks should have done.
BOY
Ain't
got none.
EMMA
All
the more reason to show some character. You'll give boys like you a bad
name.
He
tries to wriggle from her grasp to no avail.
BOY
Aw,
I'm sorry, Emma. It won't happen again.
EMMA
You
bet your britches it won't. (outraged) I'm a lady, damnit!
BOY
Okay,
okay.
EMMA
(softens)
Now, go inside and finish the food I made for you. |
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Okay, first difference in this
sequence of scenes to the one we see on screen? Buck's tribe. He is Kiowa,
not Paiute. I wonder why they decided to make him a Kiowa.
Teaspoon also identifies Buck as half-blood
right away.
There's also this one line about the ride
killing the horses. The script says Kid said it, but it was Cody who actually
uttered the line. Kid stays quiet until Teaspoon talks to him.
Anyway, it seemed to me Teaspoon was a
whole lot harder on Hickok in the original version of the script. |
ANOTHER ANGLE
With Emma's house in the
background, WE VIEW a horse trough where TEASPOON HUNTER is taking a bath.
the plainsman's lined and grizzled face gives us no hint of his age. He
is somewhere between 40 and 70. As he bathes, a horse drinks from the trough.
Teaspoon scrubs his own back and grumbles, spits brown tobacco juice into
his bath water, then reaches for an improvised towel, the horse's tail.
He wipes his face and rises from the 'bathtub' ... revealing the bottom
of his red flannels. He has been bathing while still in them.
He picks up a can of foul-looking
brown goo and begins to smear it on his hair, chest and under his arms.
TEASPOON
Bear grease. secret o' health.
He is speaking to SOMEONE
OFF SCREEN.
WE PAN Teaspoon's audience,
a line of boys who stand in front of the corral shoulder. All are similarly
dressed in the style of the American Plains, some in buckskins with fancy
Indian beadwork. Their faces are tanned and strong though still boyish.
They range in age from 15 to 18. The Kid, having made a complete visual
change, now attired in his handsome new buckskins and moccasin boots, is
last in line.
ANOTHER ANGLE -- THE BOYS
The boys catch the scent
of the bear grease, some of them wrinkling up their noses all the boys.
TEASPOON
This here Pony Express is
two thousand miles from St. Jo., Missouri all the way to Sacramento, California.
There's one hundred the ninety way stations and five hundred of the best
Injun ponies. (a beat) You will ride seventy-five miles. One day. Flat
out.
It is a horrendous suggestion.
The boys are taken aback.
THE
KID
That
would kill the horses.
TEASPOON
You'll change mounts five,
maybe six times a day. We figure you shouldn't run any animal more 'n fifteen
miles at the most.
BOY
#2
How
many riders?
TEASPOON
All
told, about eighty ... should you here pass muster.
ANOTHER ANGLE -- THE LINE
OF BOYS
(During the following, we
INTERCUT between THE LINE OF BOYS as TEASPOON meets them, and TRAINING
SEQUENCES which are underscored by Music and Teaspoon's Voice Over.)
Teaspoon scrutinizes the
FIRST BOY. He is BUCK CROSS, a half-blooded Indian, handsome, with angular
features. His black hair is shoulder length, his eyes are light green.
He wears a medicine bag amulet around his neck and seems a peaceable sort,
the knife in his moccasin boot top notwithstanding.
TEASPOON
Paiute?
BUCK
Paiute.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Teaspoon walks a few paces
to the corral, fence where a quiver of Indian arrows has been hung. He
returns, slips one arrow from the case and holds it out.
TEASPOON
What kind is that?
BUCK
Teton Lakota ... Sioux.
Teaspoon nods, replaces the
feathered missile and chooses another. He holds it out.
TEASPOON
That one?
BUCK
Comanche.
Teaspoon nods, slips it back
into the quiver and chooses a third. He holds it out.
TEASPOON
That one?
Buck looks at it askance.
BUCK
That one YOU made.
Teaspoon purses his lips
for a moment and grudgingly nods his head. The boys in the line smile.
EXT. TRAINING SEQUENCE
Buck charges on horseback
across the flat land near the station.
TEASPOON
(V.O.)
Amongst
our white brethren out here, there's rabble scum and cutthroats of every
kind ... so, I'm here to learn you my bag of tricks, and you will
learn 'em good.
TEASPOON signals and Buck
hauls in the reins. The animal glides down and falls harmlessly. Buck lands
in prone position behind his mount with gun drawn, FIRES a quick ROUND
over the animal's side and in an instant is back on his mount and racing
away. Teaspoon indicates his approval.
EXT. THE LINE OF BOYS
Teaspoon walks over to the
SECOND BOY in line. This one is the tallest of the riders, lean in build,
hard-boned and square-jawed with black hair and blue brooding eyes which
seem rarely to blink. The youth wears his sole possession of value on his
hip ... an ivory handled Colt .44. Of all the boys, he seems most the man.
TEASPOON
Wearin' that Colt a mite
low, ain't you, boy?
SECOND BOY
Feels about right.
TEASPOON
That got a hair trigger.
SECOND BOY
(a cocky grin) Yup.
Teaspoon explodes
TEASPOON
You're
a damn fool. What's your name?
SECOND BOY
Jimmy.
FULL NAME
Hickok ... James Butler
Hickok.
TEASPOON
Get this, Hickok. I don't
like no hair trigger weapon around me. You're here for ridin', not gunfightin'.
If its fightin' you want, you'll get a belly full. You'll
yell for your mama 'fore this is over with.
CLOSEUP -- HICKOK
He is unafraid. The smile
reappears.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Teaspoon surveys Hickok
and the boys.
EXT. TRAINING SEQUENCE
Hickok and a blonde boy
(Cody) are practicing the transfer of the Express pouch. While at full
gallop, the blond rider throws the pouch to Hickok. Bad throw. It hits
him in the face and knocks him off his horse. The blond youth reins in,
looks down and laughs. Hickok springs up, pulls him off his horse and they
begin to fight. They are as undisciplined as stray dogs.
TEASPOON
(V.O.)
Hardcases,
all of 'em ... Baby hardcases.
Teaspoon shakes his head
with chagrin, casually dips a bucket into the nearby horse trough ... and
douses them. |
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Another major difference concerns
Cody. As everybody who has seen the episode knows, Cody shoots the rope
tied around a bundle of hay to prove his marksmanship. The scene mentioned
here seems a lot more impressive and again, I wonder why they changed it.
Unless, of course, the producers were concerned the People For Ethical
Treatment of Animals would be mad at them for endangering a crow
;-)
Also, check out the scene with Ike and
Lou. It seemed very interesting, the first time I actually saw Lou and
Ike work closely together. They are not characters one usually sees in
a shot together. I think the only time they spoke privately in the first
season was when Lou gave Ike the ring for that girl he liked, remember
the mail-order bride.
Teaspoon also has a whole line about Nez
Perce, the American Indian group which pursued Kid later in the episode. |
EXT. THE LINE OF BOYS
Teaspoon turns to the next
youth, IKE McSWAIN. His head is as bald as an egg from scarlet fever. The
gentleness of the boy's face seem out of place in these rough circumstances.
TEASPOON
Name?
The boy does not respond
TEASPOON
Speak up.
BUCK
He can hear, but he can't
talk.
Ike is embarrassed by his
lack of speech. He looks down at his feet.
TEASPOON
What's his name?
BUCK
Ike McSwain. He's real good
around horses.
TEASPOON
That so? (regarding him
with increased interest) Ike.
The boys looks up to him.
TEASPOON
It don't much matter if
you can't talk ... just as long as you can ride.
Ike brightens, relieved.
EXT. TRAINING SEQUENCE
Teaspoon and the boys are
gathered near some tall wild grass waving in the breeze.
TEASPOON
(V.O.)
Silence
and savvy with animals. I like that.
There is seemingly no one
else around. Teaspoon puts his fingers to his mouth and whistles.
Ike and his mount suddenly
appear, rising up out of the tall grass, sprinting away. Teaspoon has taught
them to blend with the scenery.
EXT. THE LINE OF BOYS
TEASPOON (To the boys)
I 'spect some of you won't
be so lucky as Ike, to lose their hair from scarlet fever. More likely
an Injun will get some of your'n. (turns to the next boy in line) You for
instance.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The FOURTH BOY'S long blond
hair is tied back, as if to tempt fate. He is a bit smaller than the others,
but his buckskins have already seen several seasons. He stands with a Sharps
buffalo gun at his side. Though baby-faced, he is all business.
TEASPOON
What's your name?
FOURTH BOY
Cody. William F. Cody. Billy,
if ya like.
TEASPOON
I don't like. (a beat) How
old are you, Cody?
CODY
Eighteen
TEASPOON
Cow pies. You
ain't seen a day over fifteen.
Cody spits tobacco juice
in reply.
TEASPOON
By the way you stand, Cody,
you must think you're hot stuff.
CODY
I
get by.
TEASPOON
I
seen hotter stuff come out of a buffalo's hindquarters.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
Without
warning and with lightning speed, Cody brings up the sharps and fires directly
overhead.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
A
crow has been circling above. Cody has shot a few of its tail feathers
Off. The feathers flutter down as the bird continues in flight. It is an
incredible piece of marksmanship.
TEASPOON
(Unmoved). You don't have
to impress me, Cody. I ain't gonna be chasin' you.
EXT. TRAINING SEQUENCE
With Teaspoon looking on,
three abreast, Cody, Hickok and the Kid race on horseback across the flat
space.
TEASPOON
(V.O.)
Out
here you don't stand and fight ... you run like hell! Understand? Run like
hell!
Teaspoon tries to sight a
rifle on them. The three boys suddenly become disappeared targets, hanging
off the other side of their horses. As they charge past, Hickok's hand
slips from the saddle; he falls into the dirt and bounces, is riderless
horse races on. The other two boys return to upright when out of range.
Hickok gets up, his face
covered with dust. Livid, he grabs a handful of dirt and flings it with
rage.
Teaspoon shakes his head
with disapproval.
EXT. LINE OF BOYS
Teaspoon moves to the NEXT
BOY in line. LOU McCLOUD is built like the prototype jockey, small, not
heavily muscled. Lou has short brown hair, a small nose and a few freckles.
His eyes are intent, a bit nervous as Teaspoon stands looking at him.
TEASPOON
You sure you can cut this
work?
LOU
I
got this far.
TEASPOON
(Objectively) You seem a
mite puny.
There is a moment of eye
contact between Teaspoon and Lou, a possibility that he may not pass muster.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Abruptly, Lou breaks rank
and does a no-handle running mount onto a saddled horse that is a few yards
away. He spurs the horse, cuts the mustang in and out, trick riding in
a short circle, an improvised arena. Lou has the acrobatic skill on horseback
of a professional equestrian.
He pulls the horse up a few
inches in front of Teaspoon, jumps off and wordlessly takes his place back
in line.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Teaspoon removes his hat
and brushes away the small cloud of dust.
TEASPOON
(A straight face). Puny
... but spry.
Lou half smiles. He has passed
muster.
EXT.
TRAINING SEQUENCE
Teaspoon
stands holding an open pocket watch as Lou is seated with a Colt revolver
and a reloading kit. Teaspoon signals and begins to time him. Lou's hands
work expertly; ball, powder, was, tamper, percussion cap.
TEASPOON
(V.O.)
Guns
are bad things, boys. If you get yourself in a fix where you need a gun
for a way out ... you done something stupid. (A beat) However, there's
worse things than stupid. There's dead.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
Ike,
better with horses than firearms, fumbles under the time pressure as Teaspoon
peers over the watch at him. Unnerved, Ike presses the shot into the cylinder,
and tries too hard. A shower of .44 caliber shot and percussion caps fly
out of his hand. Teaspoon raises an eyebrow.
Lou
goes over to Ike and begins to show him the shortcuts. Teaspoon represses
a smile and studies his watch as a sweating Ike persists.
TEASPOON
(V.O.)
You
got to reload that quick, boys. Out here, trouble don't never come in ones.
EXT. LINE OF BOYS
Teaspoon stands before THE
KID. Half expecting another show of youthful skill or pretense.
TEASPOON
I guess you're a dead shot,
too. And hard as nails.
The Kid shrugs. There is
no swagger in him.
THE KID
Need the work.
Teaspoon takes notice of
his old 'horse pistol.'
TEASPOON
You got a rifle?
The Kid shakes his head
TEASPOON
I can issue you one.
THE KID
No, thanks. Just as soon
save the weight.
It is a sound judgment. Teaspoon
eyes the Kid more closely.
TEASPOON
You don't seem quite as
thick as some of these bucks ... we'll see
EXT. TRAINING SEQUENCE
The Kid and the others demonstrate
all that they have learned ... Changing horses at speed ... 'disappearing'
to the mount's opposite side ... the 'drop-and-shoot' ... hiding in tall
grass ... rapid reloading ... the pouch transfer. Hickok, Cody and the
others have set enough of their differences aside to function expertly
together. Rugged individualists and loners, Teaspoon's boys are finally
becoming a unit.
CLOSEUP -- TEASPOON
He registers stoic approval.
EXT. THE LINE OF BOYS
Teaspoon pauses and scratches
his ear.
TEASPOON
One
more thing. (Motions to the far distance west of them). Out yonder if you
should come upon strange Injuns, beautiful to the eye, mounted on blue-gray
animals. Well, you met up with the pride of the Injun Nations ... Nez Perce.
Boys, you see Nez Perce, you ride and pray. (He smiles darkly). Why, even
I'm scared of the Nez Perce ... And I ain't scared of nothin'.
The
boys exchange uneasy glances.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
TEASPOON
(Brightens).
You, young fools, can't see it now, but you're ridin' into history. Mark
my words.
CODY
(Unable
to contain himself) Yiiiiihaaaaa!
TEASPOON
You bucks gonna ride thousands
of miles day and night and not even the devil hisself gonna make no never
mind. You're gonna tie these United States together, a high adventure to
tell your grandchildren ...
ANOTHER
ANGLE
The
boys all toss their hats high into the air at the prospect.
THE
BOYS
Yiiiiiihaaaaaaaaaa!
TEASPOON
One
small condition ... That you live to tell the tale.
WE
PAN the boys. Their enthusiasm suddenly tempered there is a weighty, collective
silence.
CLOSEUP
-- THE KID
The
warning is written on The Kid's face. |
Now, this is where I think
the casting people screwed up. The way Scarface is described here, you'd
think he is the devil incarnate. The Scarface we saw on screen was more
annoying than terrifying, for me at least. |
INT. DAY
CLOSEUP --
He is a terrifying man with
a scar from forehead to cheek and over one eye which is covered with a
black patch. He wears a matched pair of heavy caliber Starr revolvers in
crossed shoulder holsters, casually carries a sawed off nickel plated shotgun
over his shoulder and a knife in his boot. He is the embodiment of ferocity.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Reveals that we are in a
cabin. SCARFACE is the leader of a gang of a dozen marauders, itinerant
buffalo hunters and thieves, who have surprised a lone trapper during his
meal. A plate of warm food is still on the table. The trapper is defenseless.
They have descended upon him like locusts.
SCARFACE studies the victim
with a casual gaze. The frightened trapper has already had everything of
value taken from him. and his men have loaded their two large wagons which
are visible beyond the open door. (One wagon is for hides, the other for
loot.)
The trapper protests as one
of the men is carrying a last bundle of hides out the door.
TRAPPER
(To). Please, mister. I
worked for two years for what I got. You've no right to take it ...
CLOSEUP -- SCARFACE
He looks at the trapper,
expressionless. There is a loud gunshot.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The smoking Starr revolver
is in Scarface's hand, the trapper slumped over a chair.
SCARFACE
(Under his breath). I do
now.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The thievery at hand completed,
brushes the awkwardly sprawled trapper's hand off the chair, picks up the
plate of still warm food and walks casually out of the cabin eating the
man's dinner.
END ACT 1 |
|
I thought the scene with Cody
and the snake was funny. Again, I think the writers were trying to indicate
just how different the Kid is from the other boys -- more mature, more
alert and certainly, a better shot! Eat your heart out, Jimmyholics ;-) |
ACT II
EXT. EMMA'S WAY STATION
-- LATER -- DAY
Several of the boys are readying
their gear. Lou is a few yards distant, off by himself, grooming a horse.
The Kid sits on the ground
with his back against the cabin wall, resting. It is like the calm before
the coming storm.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Enough distance away to
be private, but within The Kid's view, Buck and Ike are seated on the ground.
Ike studies the movements of Buck's hands with rapt attention. It is the
Indian Hand Sign. For the first time, the mute is learning a method of
communication.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Paiute boy's hands move
with practiced and fluid motions.
BUCK
Water.
Ike is a quick study and
mimics him, learning the sign.
CLOSEUP -- BUCK'S HANDS
They move again.
BUCK
(O.S.) Earth.
Ike is very bright and mimics
him, learning the sign.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Ike smiles eagerly. Buck,
elated with his progress, takes off his hat and playfully swats him with
it. The lesson continues.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
The
Kid smiles and puts his hat over his face.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
Cody
peeks around the cabin wall with an impish smile that signals an imminent
practical joke. He reaches out with a long stick over the end of which
is draped a non-poisonous snake. Braced for the uproar, Cody sets the snake
down ... on the Kid's chest.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
As
if always aware of his surroundings, the Kid remains undisturbed, hat over
his face. His hand casually moves, picks up the snake and releases it to
slither through the grass.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
Cody
withdraws with a foiled prankster's disappointment.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Nearby, Hickok has three
cans atop an equal number of fence posts. He sets himself, draws and FIRES.
BLAM, BLAM, BLAM. He hits the cans, three for three. He looks around confidently.
The other boys acknowledge his leadership, and none will even look him
in the eye for very long. All but ...
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid, sitting against
the cabin wall, his hat over his face has ignored Hickok's performance.
ANOTHER ANGLE
His agreed status as top
gun incomplete, Hickok strolls over to the Kid.
HICKOK
Kid
The Kid raises his hat from
his face with a forefinger.
HICKOK
I just hit three for three.
Can you do that?
The Kid regards him for a
moment, then matter-of-factly nods in the affirmative. He puts his hat
back over his face.
HICKOK
Let's see.
THE KID
(Through his hat) Lead costs
money.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Hickok drops a coin into
the Kid's lap.
HICKOK
(Insistent, almost threatening)
Let's see.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid rises wordlessly
and walks to where Jimmy had been doing his target practice. Hickok puts
three more cans up.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid sets himself, draws
and fires. With amazing speed, he empties his revolver into the cans and
before they fall, the BLASTS them AGAIN into the air or skitters them across
the ground. He has hit six for six with uncanny skill.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The other boys look on.
It is a startling display. Even Hickok cannot match that kind of shooting.
The Kid matter-of-factly
reloads his Remington. He holsters the reloaded sidearm and looks up as
...
ANOTHER ANGLE
Hickok has now turned to
face him, his expression suddenly changed. He is ready to draw, for them
to do it for real, for one or both of them to die. The other boys stand
absolutely still.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid regards Jimmy with
calm. Then, abruptly, The Kid turns away and goes back to his previous
position with his back against the wall and his hat over his face. Hickok
looks at the other boys with satisfaction. It appears that the Kid has
backed down. His ego preserved, Hickok strolls over and crouches in front
of the Kid. He speaks out of earshot of the others.
HICKOK
(Quietly) You ain't afraid
of me.
The Kid raises his hat again
and looks at him.
THE KID
You could get me in trouble.
(A beat). I don't want no trouble. And I don't want to hurt nobody.
HICKOK
(softens). Aw, I was just
foolin'.
The Kid searches his expression.
THE KID
No, you weren't.
HICKOK
(A pause, then admitting).
No, I weren't.
THE KID
Why do you act like that?
HICKOK
I dunno.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
Defused
for the moment, Hickok sits with him, the two side by side like bookends
with their hats over their faces.
HICKOK
Six
for six. You sure can shoot cans.
THE
KID
Ain't
much. they don't shoot back. |
|
There's this just one line
which in the aired version was uttered by Teaspoon, not Emma, about the
crate of Beckwith volley guns. It was Teaspoon who said he thought they
were the tools he ordered. |
EXT. EMMA'S WAY STATION
-- LATER -- DAY
WE HEAR A MAN'S VOICE CALL
...
PLAINSMAN (O.S.)
Supplies!
A PLAINSMAN has come in leading
a train of three pack mules.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Emma exits the house, and
after a perfunctory greeting to the man, she begins checking off the supplies
that have been delivered. Teaspoon and the boys come over to assist. There
are sacks of flour, sugar and horse liniment. The Plainsman takes down
a five-foot long narrow crate.
EMMA
What's this?
PLAINSMAN
I dunno. They said to deliver
it.
She signs the voucher and
the Plainsman departs.
ANOTHER ANGLE
EMMA
(To
Teaspoon and the boys). It's probably the tools I ordered.
One of the boys pries the
crate open, and all gather around with interest, staring at its contents.
ANOTHER ANGLE
the kid reaches into the
crate and produces an odd looking object. It is a weapon which appears
to be a hybrid between a rifle and a percussion shotgun; it's one awesome
barrel has seven large fluted bore holes running its length. Emma and the
boys regard it with curiosity.
CODY
I heard about 'em, but I
never seen one.
EMMA
What is it?
CODY
It's a Beckwith Volley Gun.
EMMA
What's it do?
TEASPOON
Plenty. It's got seven barrels
in one, each fifty caliber. And they all fire at once.
EMMA
Good grief.
THE
KID
There's
a whole crate of 'em in here.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Teaspoon picks up another
volley gun from the crate, scrutinizes it.
TEASPOON
(To Emma) Back up for a
lone stationkeeper. They'll want you to hand these out down the line, Emma.
EMMA
When I get around to it.
You just put 'em back in the crate, and nail it shut ... before these children
hurt themselves.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Two boys carry the crate
of guns off screen. Emma and Teaspoon speak more privately.
TEASPOON
Emma, they're here to do
a man's job. If'n you coddle 'em, you'll do 'em no good.
EMMA
they're just boys. Somebody's
got to look out for them.
TEASPOON
(Defensively) I learned
'em what I could, and I hope it's enough. But, this outfit didn't hire
orphans for nothin'.
EMMA
(Eye contact) They're not
orphans while I'm around. |
What's different? A whole lot!
We got Kid trying to talk to Lou, and this is way before he knew she was
a girl. Pretty interesting, huh? |
EXT.
EMMA'S WAY STATION -- DAY
In
the b.g., the two boys carry the crate of Beckwith Volley guns to a shed
as ...
ANOTHER
ANGLE
The
Kid leads Katy into the corrals.
Lou
McCloud is there tending to a horse. He uncinches the anima's saddle and
pulls it off. It is heavy for Lou. The Kid walks over and helps him haul
it into the horizontal top of the corral fence. Lou is strangely defensive.
LOU
I
coulda done it myself.
THE
KID
I
know that.
LOU
Thanks
just the same.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
Lou
is curiously standoffish. The Kid is quiet for a moment.
THE
KID
You
like doin' everything by yourself?
LOU
Used
to it.
THE
KID
Me,
too. (A beat) Some ways we're the same, Lou. You don't hardly talk to nobody.
It ain't my business, but ...
LOU
You're
right. It ain't your business.
Lou's
strong rebuff causes the Kid to fall silent. He returns to Katy. Lou continues
with his work. |
Missing from this dialogue
is Teaspoon's line about his bag of tricks and Kid responding with "I've
got a few of my own."
The scenes with the Nez Perce, though,
were pretty much shot as they were written.
There's a whole scene missing between Emma
saying the boys aren't orphans while under her care and the scene about
Kid's first ride. Wanna take a guess which scene that is?
Yep, the boys' town excursion. They visit
the town proper and get to meet "the law," the dashing gunfighter-turned-defender
of the people Marshall Sam Cain! |
EXT. EMMA'S WAY STATION
-- DAWN
The Kid stands with Katy
by the corral as the sun rises. It is a special day. From the id's buckskins
t Katy's brushed mane, all have seen the fine hand of preparation. They
wait in stillness.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Teaspoon is beside him.
They survey the vast expanse before them. In a display of almost parental
concern, Teaspoon tightens the already secure cinch on Katy's saddle.
THE KID
Done that.
TEASPOON
Know ya did.
There is a cloud of dust
on the horizon. The rider, a boy of no more than seventeen, comes in at
full tilt.
TEASPOON
First ride, Kid. You ready?
The Kid nods in the affirmative.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid makes his running
mount with the skill of a Plains Indian as the mail pouch is thrown between
the moving horses, hand to hand. The Kid and Katy barrel off into the distant
flat country.
ANOTHER ANGLE
TEASPOON (looking after
him) You might have the makin's.
EXT. THE PLAINS -- DAY
The vision of the boy and
his horse at breakneck speed embodies the very essence of an American dream.
They are creatures of a simpler time, fast as the wind, too young to know
fear, a life of adventure before them.
ANOTHER ANGLE -- THE HORSE
AND RIDER
... amidst the enormity
of a landscape as flat as a calm ocean.
EXT. THE PLAINS -- DUSK
Katy and The Kid ride into
a setting sun, under a red and purple sky. They pass ... buffalo ... coyotes
... prairie dogs which stick up their heads and then disappear ... American
eagles which soar overhead against a setting metallic orange sun, dark
kites in search of a meal.
EXT. THE PLAINS -- DAY
The Kid and Katy ride over
green velvet hills which roll as far as the eye can see. They come up over
a rise and stop. Katy has already run many miles, her back lathered with
sweat.
CLOSEUP -- THE KID
His expression registers
surprise, repressed fear and curiosity.
ANOTHER ANGLE -- LONG SHOT
There, off in the far distance,
on top of a hill are five riders on fresh mounts. Their faces are brown
with slightly Oriental eyes; their exotic clothes are mixtures of earth-tone
colors. They carry feathered lances. All five are mounted on identical
mottled gray Appaloosa horses. Motionless, with the vast Great Plains behind
them, we are struck by their beauty and timelessness.
ANOTHER ANGLE -- THE KID
He has run into that very
circumstance that Teaspoon had warned against ...
THE KID
... Nez Perce.
(leans down and speaks quietly
to Katy). Katy, I know you're tired ... but you gotta run now.
ANOTHER ANGLE -- THE NEZ
PERCE
They start down after him;
there is no hurriedness in their pursuit. Fluid and steady, they are frighteningly
intent.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Katy is tired , but the
Kid urges her forward.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Nez Perce close the
distance. Steadily, steadily, they come on.
ANOTHER ANGLE
They pass into rough country.
Katy is faltering. Blood drips from her nose, the equine sign of exhaustion.
If she runs much further she will burst her heart.
THE KID
Easy, Katy ... easy.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid has boxed himself
in. Ahead lies a deep crevice with a wide space between its sides. Katy
is run out. Seizing their only chance, the Kid takes her back, circles
and urges her on. They jump. Horse and rider sail over. Katy stumbles and
barely makes it, the Kid hanging on with one hand.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid looks back. In single
file, the five glue-grays clear the chasm with room to spare. They close
to five hundred yards.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Abruptly, the Kid stops
and takes an object from his saddle pouch. It is a cigar. He lights it
and puffs, coughs. He does not smoke. The Nez Perce close to two hundred
yards. The Kid spurs Katy forward. The pony stumbles, but keeps going.
The Kid looks back. One hundred yards. In a line of five, the Nez Perce
lower their lances.
CLOSEUP -- THE KID
The Kid reaches into the
saddle pouch and with a free hand pulls out a mat of large Chinese firecrackers.
With the cigar still in his mouth, he puffs the tip to a red glow. He lights
the fuse, waits for the last moments and flings the mat high into the air.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The war party runs right
onto the firecrackers, which EXPLODE under their hooves like a volley of
a hundred pistol shots. Two of the Appaloosas balk, tossing their rides
headlong. The other three blue-grays buck wildly about, running of in a
different directions.
EXT. SAME SCENE -- DAY
At a distance of a half
mile, the Kid reins Katy up on a bluff. Atop a distant knoll, one of the
mounted Nez Perce looks at him. The Indian waves, a gesture of respect.
The Kid waves back. He and Katy continue on. They will ride another day.
EXT. A MOUNTAIN RANGE --
DAY
Katy and the Kid stand on
the edge of a plateau. The panorama which lies ahead is extraordinary,
green and wild before them. They continue across the unspoiled and seemingly
endless Great Plains.
DISSOLVE |
|
A lot of different things here,
including a quiet lengthy exchange between Emma and the Kid. |
EXT.
EMMA SHANNON'S WAY STATION -- DUSK
The
Kid and Katy return to Emma's place. He tosses the pouch hand-to-hand to
the next rider who races off. The Kid's first Pony Express round trip has
been completed.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
The
Kid leads Katy to the corral, pulls her saddle and leads her to Ike McSwain.
THE
KID
Rub
her down, will you, Ike?
The
mute nods his understanding. Katy goes to his hand willingly.
INT. EMMA'S WAY STATION --
LATER -- NIGHT
The boys are in the cabin;
Cody, Hickok and several others. The Kid sits silently, head slightly bowed,
eating slowly as if still not recovered from his ordeal.
Intuitively, Emma understands.
EMMA
Hard week, Kid?
THE KID
(Without looking up). 'Bout
average.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Cody, Hickok and the others
wolf down bread and stew. Their table manners are atrocious. With Emma's
back turned to them, the boys playfully engage in a few potshots of food
fight. Cody catapults mashed potatoes from a spoon; a dollop lands between
Hickok's eyes.
Emma turns with a good-natured
scowl.
EMMA
You gents want to take your
meals elsewhere?
Under her threat, the boys
sheepishly desist as ...
ANOTHER ANGLE
The door opens and Ike enters
on unsteady fleet, in pain. There is a wound on his head. Emma and other
others turn with concern.
THE KID
He's been horse kicked.
Hickok walks over, examines
Ike's damage with an angry expression.
HICKOK
The new mustang?
Ike nods, but pats his own
chest, improvised sign language.
HICKOK
Your fault? No, it ain't.
That animal's no good. I'll bet he waited 'till you turned your back.
Ike nods in the affirmative.
Hickok starts out the door.
HICKOK
I'm gonna put him down.
Ike stops him, pats his own
chest again, taking responsibility. He refuses revenge on a frightened
animal. Ike motions his thanks, but for Hickok to return to the table.
Reluctantly, he does so.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Emma has taken her medicines
down from a shelf. Her seeming irascibility vanishes. She is kindhearted
to a fault. She sits Ike down and puts antiseptic and bandage on his wound.
He suffers this, along with the indignity of its cause, with gritted teeth
and a silent whimper.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Her first aid completed,
Emma, though a scant ten years older than he, spontaneously puts her arms
around Ike and rocks him for a moment, comforting.
ANOTHER ANGLE -- THE BOYS
The sight of Emma with her
arms around the injured mute, this display of maternal caring causes the
room to fall to an awkward silence. This moment is as close to a mother's
love as many of them can remember. despite their guns and buckskins, they
are boys, mere children after all.
The boys react in disparate
ways, each for his own reasons. Several look down at the floor. Hickok
views Ike's acceptance of comforting as weakness. He turns his back with
distaste.
EXT.
EMMA'S WAY STATION -- LATER -- NIGHT
The
Kid is bedded down alone on the ground, twenty feet from the corral. There,
he can be in close proximity to Katy who is in the corner of the pen nearest
to him.
CLOSEUP
-- THE KID
He
looks up at a sky of endless twinkling stars.
Emma
exits from the cabin, and walks to where the Kid is bedded down. She puts
another wool blanket over him and looks down at the boy with affection.
EMMA
It's
going to be cold tonight.
THE
KID
(He
accepts it with a nod of genuine thanks.) Thanks, Emma.
She
motions to the b.g.; there is a bunkhouse with a light on and the SOUND
of the other RIDERS ROUGHHOUSING inside.
EMMA
There's
a bunk for you inside.
THE
KID
No,
I ... prefer it here. More private.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
Before
returning to the cabin she takes one backward glance, a wise and good natured
appreciation of him.
EMMA
You
always sleep near your horse?
THE
KID
She's
all I got.
EMMA
Good
night , Kid.
THE
KID
'Night,
Emma.
With
a soft smile, Emma returns to the cabin and closes the door. After a moment,
the small glowing light goes out.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
The
Kid looks up at Katy, the paint pony framed against a backdrop of moon,
stars and black sky.
The
Kid pulls the blanket over his shoulders against the night chill and drifts
off to sleep.
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EXT.
ANOTHER WAY STATION -- DAY
Scarface
and his 'Wild Ones' have taken a distant way station. They are in the midst
of trashing the place, drinking, carrying the station's supplies to their
wagons. They are like wild animals.
Scarface
casually oversees their work, while cutting and eating pieces of stolen
sausage with a large, shiny knife.
ANOTHER
ANGLE
The
station master lies dead, partly visible near the cabin.
EXT. THE WAY STATION -- LATER
-- DAY
Lou McCloud rides into the
station and reins in his mount. He becomes suspicious. There are horses
in the corral, but an eerie stillness about the place. It seems deserted;
there is no one to meet him, no horses saddled and waiting.
ANOTHER ANGLE
ONE OF SCARFACE'S MEN suddenly
appears, steps into the clear, having used the cabin as cover. He is Wesley,
a small and desperate looking man with ferret-like eyes.
Lou is startled by the very
sight of him.
WESLEY
'Lo, Sonny.
OTHER ANGLES
ANOTHER OF SCARFACE'S MEN
appears at the opposite end of the cabin. ANOTHER near the corral.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Lou quickly surveys the
scene. No exchange of words is necessary. Lou's eyes dart for a way out.
ANOTHER ANGLE
appears, standing
on the corner of the porch, just looking at Lou. He cuts another piece
of sausage with his knife.
(Casually) What's in them
bags, sonny?
ANOTHER ANGLE
There is no way out for
Lou, but he makes his move, spurs his tired mount forward trying to run
for it. He only rides a few yards as ...
ANOTHER ANGLE
casually draws one
of his Starr revolvers from its shoulder holster, aims and FIRES.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Lou is knocked out of the
saddle, falls in the dirt and lies still. The horse stops and stands near
the fallen rider.
ANOTHER ANGLE
motions for one of
his men to take the horse and pouches. He does so.
EXT. THE WAY STATION -- SAME
SCENE -- DAY
Without a backward glance
at the boy lying in the dirt, and his men ride out with their wagons, herding
the stock.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Among the horses stolen
from the corral is Katy.
EXT. THE WAY STATION -- LATER
-- DAY
The Kid, on a black mustang,
is the next to ride in. He quickly surveys the scene and finds Lou. He
jumps off his mount ...
THE KID
Lou.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The Kid struggles to hoist
Lou on his shoulders, and carries him into the cabin.
INT. WAY STATION -- THE CABIN
SAME SCENE -- DAY
The Kid carefully turns
Lou over and feels for a pulse at the neck. Lou's eyes flutter open. He
is alive semi-conscious. There is a bloody wound at his ribs.
THE KID
(Shaken) Hang on, Lou.
The Kid looks at his hand
with revulsion; Lou's blood is on it.
THE KID
It'll be okay, Lou, lemme
see how bad ...
The Kid begins to carefully
open Lou's shirt. Though semi-conscious, the injured rider uses his feeble
strength to push the Kid's hands away.
LOU
No. Don't
The Kid, presuming delirium,
persists and quickly rips Lou's shirt partly open to get at the wound.
CLOSEUP -- THE KID
He draws back in shock,
stares at Lou, stunned.
CLOSEUP -- LOU
Lou, through half-closed
eyes, looks up at the Kid with fear.
ANOTHER ANGLE
THE KID
(Stunned revelation) Lou,
I ...
LOU
What's the matter, Kid?
Never seen a girl before?
END ACT II
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