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Country 1.USA 14 2.UK 12 3.AUS 5 4.SA 3 5.Can 2

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 Name: JamesL Age: 27 Country: AUS Story: #1 Template pg: 18
Original: ..Remember?' 'You're really..
Revised: ..Remember?' Rosita stepped back uneasily from the..
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 Name: Susie A Age: 22 Country: UK Story: #1 Template pg: 16
Original: The sun.. quickly.
Revised: The setting sun was evidence of the day's quick departure.
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 Name: MichaelT Age: 21 Country: USA Story: #1 Template pg: 15
Original: 'Nothing really.. untarnished.
Revised: 'Nothing really' responded the professor. But then turning..
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 Name: PeterS Age: 19 Country: USA Story: #1 Template pg: 16
Original: Although the professor's.. suspicious
Revised: Although the professor's reasons seemed credible, his..
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 Name: JohnM Age: 23 Country: UK Story: #1 Template pg: 10
Original: The woman.. her.
Revised: The woman looked toward the forest. Her motioning to..
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 Name: AmyP Age: 24 Country: USA Story: #1 Template pg: 10
Original: They.. closer.
Revised: The travelers crept closer, crouching.
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 Name: HenryP Age: 21 Country: UK Story: #1 Template pg: 10
Original: ..interjected Rosita.
Revised: ..interjected Rosita. 'You sound like you're going to wind..
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8
 Name: Enigma Age: 17 Country: UK Story: #1 Template pg: 10
Original: Rosita and.. died.
Revised: Rosita and the couple stood transfixed, their lighted eyes..
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 Name: Roslin K Age: 25 Country: UK Story: #1 Template pg: 10
Original: They hurried.. ahead.
Revised: The weary group burst forward with new energy and..
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10
 Name: RonaldS Age: 42 Country: USA Story: #1 Template pg: 1
Original: Professor Ranjith.. students.
Revised: Professor Ranjith gazed out through the large window..
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11
 Name: WilliamSW Age: 33 Country: UK Story: #1 Template pg: 15
Original: ..can do for me. We need..
Revised: ..can do for me.' At this Ho Ling and Masilo turned..
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12
 Name: FJones Age: 32 Country: Canada Story: #1 Template pg: 4
Original: The sunlight.. behind.
Revised: The sunlight streaming in was a striking contrast to the..
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13
 Name: Johank Age: 18 Country: SA Story: #1 Template pg: 16
Original: ..to stay longer.
Revised: ..to stay longer, realising that they could be more easily..
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14
 Name: ChristineJ Age: 19 Country: UK Story: #1 Template pg: 9
Original: The professor.. delighted.
Revised: The professor's delight was lost on the apathetic students.
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15
 Name: BruceL Age: 32 Country: UK Story: #1 Template pg: 12
Original: Ho Ling was greatly relieved.
Revised: Ho Ling was greatly relieved to discover that the young..
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 Name: DianneS Age: 26 Country: SA Story: #1 Template pg: 16
Original: ..their scientific endeavor.
Revised: ..their scientific endeavor. Rosita was curious as to why..
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 Name: GerryK Age: 27 Country: SA Story: #1 Template pg: 7
Original: ..remarked the professor.
Revised: ..remarked the professor, disenchanted.
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18
 Name: MichaelM Age: 21 Country: USA Story: #1 Template pg: 12
Original: ..direction to follow.' 'And what..
Revised: ..direction to follow.' 'But professor, surely the benefits..
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 Name: JeffT Age: 26 Country: UK Story: #1 Template pg: 12
Original: ..she continued 'Are we..
Revised: ..she continued. 'Yet.. I thought that generally you..
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20
 Name: PeteS Age: 31 Country: Aus Story: #1 Template pg: 16
Original: ..controlled time.
Revised: ..controlled time while Masilo was hoping to get to know..
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21
 Name: JackL Age: 23 Country: Aus Story: #1 Template pg: 10
Original: ..The essence of..
Revised: ..the cornerstone of..
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22
 Name: PatrickL Age: 22 Country: USA Story: #1 Template pg: 19
Original: ..possibility. 'Allow me to..
Revised: ..possibility. 'Wait a moment' came an intrusive voice. The..
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23
 Name: DavidJ Age: 27 Country: USA Story: #1 Template pg: 14
Original: The professor bumbled.. speech.
Revised: Not a strong public speaker, the professor notified..
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24
 Name: PaulP Age: 18 Country: USA Story: #1 Template pg: 13
Original: ..the reversal chamber.
Revised: ..the reversal chamber. It offered a feeling of emotional..
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 Name: SamJ Age: 17 Country: USA Story: #1 Template pg: 18
Original: ..I answered! I was part..
Revised: ..I answered! You can't travel back to the beginning of..
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 Name: JaneK Age: 21 Country: Aus Story: #1 Template pg: 19
Original: Everyone in.. silent.
Revised: A mist of silence blanketed the chamber.
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 Name: MaryST Age: 30 Country: Canada Story: #1 Template pg: 11
Original: The professor.. fruit
Revised: The professor bit off a sizeable chunk of the nourishing..
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28
 Name: DeborahL Age: 19 Country: UK Story: #1 Template pg: 19
Original: 'We must.. late'
Revised: 'It's time to close the door.'
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 Name: MelissaD Age: 25 Country: USA Story: #1 Template pg: 14
Original: And that was it.
Revised: And that was it. The professor who didn't have a way..
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